how soon to kill the first one?

[Lisa Fernow]

In the golden age mysteries, the victim doesn't necessarily die right away, but I have heard that the convention today is to kill your first victim off within the first 30 pages. Is this a hard and fast rule? Are there successful examples of mysteries that don't lead off with a murder immediately? Look forward to your thoughts.

[I. J. Parker]

Just started a Connelly novel (nothing wrong with his sales!). No body! Instead a new phone number that gets calls for a hooker called Lilly. And the reader knows that there is something terribly wrong with Lilly and reads on through pages of technical crap about computer stuff. :)

[Lisa Fernow]

He's a great writer. Thanks.

[Eric Christopherson]

That's my second favorite Connelly, after The Lincoln Lawyer, because I loved the set-up. (On the down side I figured out the villain fairly early on.)

[Lisa Fernow]

Did that diminish your appreciation of the book, do you think? Or perhaps you enjoyed outwitting the author!

[Lisa Fernow]

I'm curious about what you mean when you say it depends on the number of plot-lines. Would that suggest you have enough suspense going on so you don't need to dispatch people sooner? Interesting! I have two plot lines and in my existing draft I've killed off someone from my secondary plot first, but that seems to be disorienting some of my readers. Maybe the victim from the first plot has to come first? Thanks.

[Carola Dunn]

In my latest Daisy mystery, SHEER FOLLY, there's no victim till about half way through. My editor was worried, but as he read, he decided the tension kept building so it didn't matter. Still, just to please him, I put the body in Chapter 2 in the next book, A COLOURFUL DEATH, the second Cornish mystery. The one I'm writing now has three bodies reported in Chapter 1! I go with wherever the story takes me. On the whole, I like to get to know characters before I kill them.

Oops, sorry, that pic came out bigger than I expected!

[Lisa Fernow]

Yeah - I want people to want my victims dead, and to know them is to hate them. Your mystery looks like a lot of fun, btw. Thanks. Lisa

[REID JACKSON (pen name)]

We've been victimized

[Lisa Fernow]

Oh, I JUST got that one!

[R. Michael Phillips]

How soon is a great question and I have to agree with a few points I read here. If the point of the story is to solve a murder, then I agree it should be early and the hook is important. Whether it's the first, second or third chapter should be up to the writer. My first mystery is about an art theft, but there is a key murder that is "uncovered" quite by accident well into chapter 5. I tried it at the beginning, but it was more a distraction than a key element to set up the plot so I left it where it was. Stumbling across it had a much greater effect. I like writers that don't follow hard and fast rules, especially in a mystery. Some people jump right into a hot bath and others ease in one toe at a time. Either way, you still get wet.

[Lisa Fernow]

Your art theft sounds very glamorous. What's the title?

[R. Michael Phillips]

Hi Lisa,
Along Came A Fifer - is the name of the book. There is a murder that is an element of the plot. It is suggested at in the first couple of chapters but it gets revealed by surprise later on. This sets up the second story line. The second book in the series starts out with a murder which sets up the plot for the entire story.
Mike