Ah, the joys of editing. "Please find enclosed the first draft of the second book." "I love it! It's great!! I enclose my initial thoughts." Read ten page summary of why it is not so great. "Please find enclosed re-written draft of second book." "Thank you. Oh, that's much better. Now it's really great! Fantastic!! I enclose the line edits." Read detailed line-by-line breakdown of why it is neith…