Ah, the joys of editing.
"Please find enclosed the first draft of the second book."
"I love it! It's great!! I enclose my initial thoughts."
Read ten page summary of why it is not so great.
"Please find enclosed re-written draft of second book."
"Thank you. Oh, that's much better. Now it's really great! Fantastic!! I enclose the line edits."
Read detailed line-by-line breakdown of why it is neith…