Talk should not be cheap. Do your characters talk to each other? A lot? From a short story of mine.
Frustrated, Abie wiped the lens on his handkerchief and studied the numbers on the dial again. “I can’t see with these glasses.” He took them off and studied them.
“Drat, I got Ethel’s glasses. Mine must be at home.”
“Roscoe, get over here and turn this dial.” It was obvious the squinty-eyed sca…
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