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About Ailene Yasmin

Ailene Yasmin
Female
Prague, Czech Republic
Hometown:
New York City
About Me:
Reformed journalist turned freelance writer, blogger and first-time crime author. Originally from NYC, I lived in different places around the US but left the country in May 2007 to travel Europe. I bounced around several different countries before landing in Prague where I completed my first manuscript. Currently, involved in the hellish process of shopping that same ms, while working on other writing projects.

"Once you choose hope, anything's possible." ~~Superman Christopher Reeve
I Am A:
Reader, Writer
Website:
blog.llmetropolis.com
Books And Authors I Like:
Michael Connelly, James Patterson, John Sanford, Dean Koontz, Patricia Cornwell, J.A. Konrath, Iris Johansen, Stuart Woods, Dennis Lehane, Robert Dugoni (The Jury Master).
Movies And TV Shows I Like:
City of God, Snatch, Ocean's Trilogy... all good. Don't have a television since I left US but I used to enjoy Law & Order (original and Criminal Intent), City Confidential, American Justice and the Michael Baden Autopsy series on HBO.

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LoisLane's Metropolis

Woman

Today, I'm sitting here thinking to myself, when I gave my mother her nickname: Woman. <br><br> I can't remember when I did it. It was, at least, 10 years ago. Yeah, yeah I know...

Goal!

It's been a while since I've written about my travel adventures. I couldn't let today go by without giving it a mention. Why? Because today marks a year that I left the US to travel and live abroad.<br> <br> It was my goal to stay gone&nbsp;one year. It was my hope not to return for an indefinite period of time. For those of you who may not know, my journey carried me through the fjords&nbsp;in the land of&nbsp;the midnight sun in&nbsp;Norway, the ghettos of Paris along with the&nbsp;jardins of the Louvre, the pink sunrises, super yachts and fresh food&nbsp;of Antibes, the&nbsp;walls of ...

BLACKed Out

Although I live on foreign soil, my heart and mind is back home in the States. Why? Because our impending election will shape not just our future but how the rest of the world views us. <br><br> Whether you realize it or not, you--we are seen as warmonging, imperialists who push our beliefs on smaller nations for profit. They believe this because of how our country is governed. Given that evidence, they would be correct....

The Favour Bank

Tom Wolfe was the genius who invented it. Of course, he did so to paint a picture of how the 'old boy system' in 1980s New York worked but it was genius nonetheless.<br> <br> Don't worry if you haven't read Wolfe's masterpiece, <em>Bonfire of the Vanities</em>, perhaps you've seen the movie, <em>Pay It Forward</em> or read another masterpiece by litery fiction writer, Paulo Coelho, <em>The Zahir</em>. Wolfe invented&nbsp;The Favour Bank, and Coelho made it a rule to live and love by. <br> <br> The idea is simple: do things to help others without expecting things in return. In the 'bank' ideology that is called ...

The Dutch Debate

Ok, ok, ok, here's my take on the Dutch Debate. *yawns* <br><br>First off, let me tell you I feel compelled to write about last night's Pennsylvania debate because it's technically news, although...

Egg Hatches Hen

It was on Oprah. That was the first clue I wasn't reading something straight out of the National Enquirer. A line in a short and cryptic email read, "What must God be thinking." Well, um, if you believe in God then you are aware He doesn't think. He knows. Thus, whatever it is, He saw it coming. However, I pushed my snarkiness aside for the moment and clicked on the link. What did I find, pray tell? That, yes, indeed, hell has frozen over and women have lost...

March Madness

I usually don't write long entries, but I am sounding off here, so this entry is longer than any other I have ever written. I understand if you can't sit through it and appreciate it if you do. <br><br> Whew! I barely survived March. Not sure what the planets were up to but they were certainly not in conjunction with my own natal chart. The month started out well enough with the expectation of blooming friendships and my manuscript being read by two separate agents in New York. <br><br> Before the second week was over, however, both friendships screeched to a halt as I realized neither was for me, despite how much I wanted them to be. Around the same time...

The Dunbar Four

Just when you think Al Sharpton is done with missteps he goes and makes a terrific gaffe of epic proportions. <br><br> The latest off-tempo move by Rev. Press-n-Curl involves a yet another rape case. This time, however, instead of being a teenage girl it involved a single mother, her young son and four teenaged boys. The setting is Dunbar Village in West Palm Beach, Florida...

Wright is Right

The more I think about it, the more pissed off I get. <br><br> All these pundits and 'intellectuals' get on my fucking, got-damned nerves. They are granted a voice of which they are blessed with the masses' rapt attention and they forever use it do to what, exactly? Spin to play politics and not very well is what they do. This latest hubbub over Rev. Jeremiah Wright's sermons are not taken out of context but they are misunderstood under the veil of the white majority's misplaced righteous indignation...

We Shall Overcome

Much has been made about Barack Obama's ethnicity during his run for the Democratic Nomination, but it wasn’t until Tuesday that the nation realized what his biracial identity can do for healing our nation’s persistent racial wounds.<br><br>In reading many articles analyzing his “A More Perfect Union” speech, where he was likened to Abraham Lincoln, this ABC News article, cites one Shelby Steele, a biracial writer who says Obama is confused about his heritage...
 

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Hot Off My Press

Um, what to write, eh?

I'm a book afficionado and crime/legal thrillers are my first love. I have cheated a bit getting more into prose (Paulo Coelho) but that's OK, since I don't believe in being a one-trick pony and plan to write volumes in several genres.

I blog frequently on my own Web site, which is not crime-fiction related, since my foray into writing was through journalism but then again, I did cover, (baaah!) crime. Early on, I was nicknamed LoisLane and it stuck because that's how I write...with loads of passion and no fear.

CHILD SUPPORT is the name of my finished manuscript completed in October 2007, which I edited/revised and began shopping in January. Since then, I have received about 15 query rejections and another 15 or so that went utterly unacknowledged. I've had one request for a partial and separate one for a full read. No takers yet. So my search continues. There's nothing like prolonged rejection to build some character, eh? (Oh yeah, stories about years and years of trying, don't instill confidence OR hope...lol.)

In the meanwhile, I have several projects underway, including NEWSROOM, another thriller...FINDING MY FUTURE (literary prose) and I am launching my own online magazine based on my blog later this year.

So that's me.

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AgentQuest: The Query query

Now, after chatting a bit with helpful Molli N., a publisher turned publishing coach for poor saps like me, I am taking a stab at rewriting my query--AGAIN. I was advised--against all of the blog recommendations on the subject-- to leave out any attempt at personalization. There's an agent I have discovered who I really would like to read my ms, so I want the new letter to impress her enough to request that almighty read. Please tell me what you think. I love constructive criticism, but the key…

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Posted by Ailene Yasmin on March 27th, 2008 at 11:00pm — 4 Comments (Add)
 

Agents v. Readers

I'm just venting. This blog has no point, except to get out of my mind, the latest adventure in what I'm calling, My AgentQuest. Hmmm. I'm not sure what to make of my situation. I have done several rounds of edits and revisions to my manuscript, CHILD SUPPORT. I have queried agents and after only one partial and one full read, everyone has passed, mostly on the personalized letter alone. Coming from a newspaper background, I have several people who read me. So, I reached out to one and…

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Posted by Ailene Yasmin on March 25th, 2008 at 6:56pm — 9 Comments (Add)
 

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At 4:48am on April 4th, 2008, Charles A. King said…
I really like animals, really. I'm owned by a cat myself. Funny how that works. As far as ice breaking, not my intent, but I'll hang with the ripples. ... Eh? You like star trek? :)
At 12:32am on April 3rd, 2008, Joyce Tremel said…
I just noticed your comment on my page. Sorry it took so long! I'm glad you're getting responses to your query. I don't know if I mentioned it, but I'm querying again too. My agent and I "broke up" recently. It's not any fun!
At 6:33am on March 26th, 2008, Jack Getze said…
No, I understand completely. It is expensive. And you already understand that fiction is a craft. I wasted 30 years thinking I was already equipped to write novels. I wasn't.
At 5:58am on March 26th, 2008, Jack Getze said…
I'd have to say I got almost everything from conferences and conventions. I wrote eight unpublished novels before I went to Writers Retreat Workshop and learned that fiction was much different that my journalism background. I met other writers there, made friends, including one who introduced me to her agent, who now is mine, and who sold my first and second novels. The mystery conventions have been important to me as a published author, not so much before. I guess I'm saying, everybody's different, but networking works in any business, and publishing is a business.
At 1:00am on March 26th, 2008, Grant McKenzie said…
Thanks, Ailene. Switch launches in the UK on Nov. 3. So far, I've seen it up for pre-order on Amazon UK, Amazon Germany and Amazon Canada, and I'm still working on the line edits - yikes!
At 12:13am on March 26th, 2008, L.J. Sellers said…
Hi Ailene
I sympathize with your quest. Agents are as hard to figure out as editors. And they're no guarantee. I had the best agent in the business representing a novel he loved and still couldn't sell it. If you have readers telling you they love your story, keep the faith. And never change something you don't want to based on one person's opinion. Best wishes to you.
At 11:39pm on March 18th, 2008, Linton Robinson said…
Oooo, Gannett. Did they make you take a mark on your forehead?

The Copley papers and Freedom Papers chains are also pretty messed up, but in a sort of bumbling, sitcom way. Satan stumbling over his own hooves.

Main thing is, you're back among the human race.
At 9:24am on March 18th, 2008, Linton Robinson said…
Reformed journalist. I like it. I prefer to think of myself as "recovering" journalist.
 
 

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