The font for the title is really cool. I'd make the byline smaller to draw more attention to it. Right now they are roughly the same height and are competing for the spot the eye is drawn to.
Comment by I. J. Parker on March 13, 2011 at 8:53am
You could use white for your name. I rather like it otherwise. Simple and effective. Much good luck!
Comment by B.R.Stateham on March 13, 2011 at 7:39am
I see your point, Ben, about the green. My wife is not too thrilled about green, either. But my thinking on the version 2.0 was too much red. Po-ta-toes--Po-TAT-oes. It's all good.
Well, you heard my thoughts on your facebook string. My vote was for a color-changed version 1.0. I think the gun/knife combo make it too crowded. But that's just my opinion.
For this version, I don't think the green works. Swap it out for the red in the title. Black and red are go-to crime colors. Black, green and red remind me of a noir Christmas.
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