Or is it not good in your opinion?
I'm revising now--and it's very easy for me to just cut it
out--but I'm wondering about it. Perhaps it gives a more insightful view of the character recalling a tiny bit of conversation.
There is over all, almost no backstory apart from a sentence or two sparsely placed.
Yes, it has to relate to the story and to move the plot along--but can it also be enriching?
Opinions please?