What a delightful story, Minerva. Very well staged and the characters were very believable. You even captured all the subtle nuances between a wife and sports fanatic husband- it gave the family dimension. First rate.
Absolutely terrific. I can't wait to read more of the story, Minvera! Will it continue? I like the characters, you got the voices nailed down perfectly. Hope it's not a one-time appearance for these folks!