The Cliché Challenge - CrimeSpace2024-03-29T15:06:57Zhttps://crimespace.ning.com/forum/topics/537324:Topic:32697?commentId=537324%3AComment%3A32974&feed=yes&xn_auth=noyeah, but it's an edgar. some…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:334952007-05-09T16:26:57.384ZSimon Woodhttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/simonsubs
yeah, but it's an edgar. some times, you have to get your hands dirty...and other bits...
yeah, but it's an edgar. some times, you have to get your hands dirty...and other bits... I recommend a career as a wri…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:334202007-05-09T13:00:08.808ZLois Karlinhttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/0lkarlin1
I recommend a career as a writing teacher Simon. No kid could resist. You might have done more with punctuation, however...you've used not a single exclamation point!
I recommend a career as a writing teacher Simon. No kid could resist. You might have done more with punctuation, however...you've used not a single exclamation point! You bravely started it, Donna…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332942007-05-09T06:09:43.983ZJordan Danehttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/JordanDane
You bravely started it, Donna. And I'm STILL laughing.
You bravely started it, Donna. And I'm STILL laughing. Oh, I've had GREAT fun readin…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332742007-05-09T04:58:37.182ZDonna Moorehttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/DonnaMoore
Oh, I've had GREAT fun reading all these - thanks for the laughs all!
Oh, I've had GREAT fun reading all these - thanks for the laughs all! I'm going over my last MS--hi…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332272007-05-09T02:37:22.011ZJordan Danehttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/JordanDane
I'm going over my last MS--hitting the edits real hard again. This cliche thing was far too easy. I had my 'dumb it down' throttle revved to the red zone without even trying.
I'm going over my last MS--hitting the edits real hard again. This cliche thing was far too easy. I had my 'dumb it down' throttle revved to the red zone without even trying. Everyone's a critic...
Glad…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332252007-05-09T02:34:52.745ZJordan Danehttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/JordanDane
Everyone's a critic...<br />
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Glad you showed up, A. We need you.
Everyone's a critic...<br />
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Glad you showed up, A. We need you. Jordan:
I was in the prime o…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332242007-05-09T02:34:19.922ZJackBludishttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/JackBludis
Jordan:<br />
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I was in the prime of life, so I went into the judges, stood on my own two feet, and laid my cards on the table. That was half the battle. Some might tell you it’s a thrill just to get nominated. That's so, but you get ripped to shreds in the process. It's the road to nowhere, unless you luck out and come home a winner. Getting nominated is only half the battle. I lost in the clinches.<br />
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Well, pal, that's the official version.
Jordan:<br />
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I was in the prime of life, so I went into the judges, stood on my own two feet, and laid my cards on the table. That was half the battle. Some might tell you it’s a thrill just to get nominated. That's so, but you get ripped to shreds in the process. It's the road to nowhere, unless you luck out and come home a winner. Getting nominated is only half the battle. I lost in the clinches.<br />
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Well, pal, that's the official version. Oh, jeez, these are cliches?…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332132007-05-09T02:17:42.997ZAmanda Stevenshttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/AmandaStevens
Oh, jeez, these are cliches? I better go do some editing.
Oh, jeez, these are cliches? I better go do some editing. Ha! The truth is never far of…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332012007-05-09T01:33:58.155ZDennis Leppanenhttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/TheWarbler
Ha! The truth is never far off...It's amazing all the cliches' I thought of after I finished.
Ha! The truth is never far off...It's amazing all the cliches' I thought of after I finished. I think you're recapping last…tag:crimespace.ning.com,2007-05-09:537324:Comment:332002007-05-09T01:30:58.851ZJordan Danehttps://crimespace.ning.com/profile/JordanDane
I think you're recapping last night, Dennis. You weren't out on a walk--you were drinkin' 'em real pretty...and slaying the bimbos, weren't you Gilligan?
I think you're recapping last night, Dennis. You weren't out on a walk--you were drinkin' 'em real pretty...and slaying the bimbos, weren't you Gilligan?