Fog vs Pollution

[Victoria Dougherty]

Hi, Everyone.

 

First - thanks for all the replies about comedy and the thriller.  I've got a new question.  What provides better atmosphere in a thriller/mystery/crime novel, fog or pollution?  I mean that in the most pervasive sense.  For instance, WWII France is fog, Cold War Bucharest is pollution.

[John Michael Brantingham]

And then it gets stuck there. I've had a chronic cough for the last 35 years that goes away when I leave LA. Frankly I'd like to get out of it permanently at some point.