Starting off on the right track! Lets see how it go's!?!!??

Theres lots of things I must learn as a Man an a Writer! My heart and will has been this natural ability to Write. I may not have the best grammer or spelling but im determined to fix my faults!

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Oh hell, don't worry about it. I think you're three sentences onto something there...
Daniel, thanks for the endorsement for WritersOnLineWorkshops. I'm an instructor there and I think it's a great place for writers to hone their craft.
I agree with Tribe. I think you're on to something.

"im determined to fix my faults!"

It has all the promise and resonance of Richard III's
"I am determined to prove a villain"

Not bad.
"Theres lots of things I must learn as a Man"

I have respect for any guy who can admit this.


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