Starting off on the right track! Lets see how it go's!?!!??

[liel3030]

Theres lots of things I must learn as a Man an a Writer! My heart and will has been this natural ability to Write. I may not have the best grammer or spelling but im determined to fix my faults!

[Tribe]

Oh hell, don't worry about it. I think you're three sentences onto something there...

[Daniel Hatadi]

Here's a good place to check out for starters:

http://www.writersonlineworkshops.com/

http://www.writersonlineworkshops.com/WritingBasicsOverview.asp

Enjoy!

[Carol Davis Luce]

Daniel, thanks for the endorsement for WritersOnLineWorkshops. I'm an instructor there and I think it's a great place for writers to hone their craft.

[David Terrenoire]

I agree with Tribe. I think you're on to something.

"im determined to fix my faults!"

It has all the promise and resonance of Richard III's
"I am determined to prove a villain"

Not bad.

[Sandra Ruttan]

"Theres lots of things I must learn as a Man"

I have respect for any guy who can admit this.